Plan of action

I have received feedback from the draft that I have created and I have taken all of the points into consideration and I am going to start making improvements to my draft so that I can improve my mark. The first thing that I will change is the pictures of my model because from my feedback i have been told that he does not look correct in the photos i have used on him. I also need to add small details that I have missed such as a price, date, adjust the bar code and align some of the text. I also need to improve the content in my article fixing any mistakes I have made and to end the article in a better way. I will add 3 columns to my double page spread and add some more questions for my artist to answer.